An alright work
Their bodies appear too rigid. The gun seems too generic. The outside does not seem to have any detail. The first character has his eyes "popping" out of his head the way they seem attached to the glasses.
That is enough suggestions for now. And by suggestions I mean I suggest you work on those things.
This is what you asked for correct?
The gun is a Glock 17, there extremely generic to begin with... i even made from looking at one on google, yeah that generic. And the glasses are how the real Madness glasses would turn out. But thanks anyways i guess. You gave me the stuff i asked for. :)
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I can't tell whether or not the monster is sucking in the surrounding area or if it is emitting some sort of beam out of its mouth. Either way I think this is a nice piece of work.
The monster appears to have more detail however than the rest of the piece.
haha yeah its a little confusing, but the theme was "planet eater" so the monster is suckin up some delicious earth
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